I liked this.. I'll have to check out your other tracks :)
Guitars and synths were blended well enough, which is a tough thing to do. I loved the melody that came in at around 1min
Drums were nice too. I felt they could have been a bit busier- but thats just personal taste :)
Keep up the good work
I feel leaving you a review is kind of pointless when I have nothing to say besides "omg so good"
But hey, who doesn't like positive feedback? :)
Keep making music, I'm pretty confident you will rule the world someday
What else can I say? I loved it :)
There isn't a whole lot of feedback i can offer you, as you clearly know the genre and love doing what you do
The synth lead part sort of jumped out at me out of nowhere, then got totally crushed underneath the drums that came in afterward.. So I suppose be careful with limiting/compressing everything masterwise (wasnt too bad anyway).
Perhaps try spreading the synth really hard-stereo, so you have room in the center for all the main action, and all the tonality and atmosphere is to the sides? idk- these are all minor issues which don't really matter whole lot, cause the track is still totally badass
best of luck with finishing your cd!
I don't really like any of the Industrial work on NG, but you are an exception...
This is really good, the development didn't wear thin, but got stronger as it went.
The only thing I would suggest is a dominant melody. The song builds up, but doesn't really break into anything. There is definately something cool going on with your bassline and supporting instruments, but they need a final element to complete the mix.
Otherwise, drumwork and such was fantastic.
Keep up the great work :)
Yeah the main melody is probably hard to recognize, there is one slightly. I focused on the beats (mostly), speed, and overall build-up...etc.
Thanks for the review! :)
Amen break? Who said that!?
Great shit dude, you've gotten way better :P
thnx dude. long time no talk dude!!! how are u man?
I regret not listning to your tracks earlier :P
lol, you dont need my reviews anyway- you have heaps. I dont think I'll ever know what makes people review stuff. The audio portal is a frustrating and unrewarding place.
I feel so stupid, I uploaded a track to the wrong account :P
Anyway, if you ever feel like doing a collab- feel free to drop me a line.
I'll be looking forward to more of your work, you maverick renegade.
No probs Sto0g3
I know you didn't have to review,
Unrewarding eh? well we all submit our music and if people happen to like what we all do, then that's a plus in my book
Frustrating? erm I suppose, I don't let it get to me, I just do my thing
I review stuff, because I believe there are people on here that need small amounts of advice to progress, some don't any advice, I need it from time to time so I can keep improving
Collab eh? sure thing I'm always looking to push myself by working with others I find this helps
Thanks for droppig by Sto0g3
Peace Out man!
maverick renegade? lol XD thanks!
The song sounds great as it is, but if you want to improve, the only real direction I could suggest is adding synth sounds to support what you have going.
Keep it up, I'll be looking for your stuff in the future.
Thanks for the great review, I'm always aiming to improve, and I got some new tune on the go at the moment, I will at some point re-do the tunes that have already been uploaded, based on reviews made so far! Thanks again and Peace Out! Stealth
Hey hey. I like it. I will fuck with it and send the results to you.
Glad to see you're back, fackin' naf cunt.
God, guit fx were good and I love your drums.
Its a shame when people only see Vesano's vox as "BLAAAAAH UGGGRHHHDHASHdAS"
But yes, this had a sorta Nile feel to it.
Actually the drums reminded me of Burzum :P
thanks alot,hahaha i don't give a shit what people say about nile,i love em <3
\m/ churr as review man
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