Age/Gender: 20, Male
Location: NSW, Australiasia
Job: Reptillian Overlord
I've recently discovered Earl Grey tea and how great it is
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23 Reviews | 11 w/ Responses
I don't really like any of the Industrial work on NG, but you are an exception...
This is really good, the development didn't wear thin, but got stronger as it went.
The only thing I would suggest is a dominant melody. The song builds up, but doesn't really break into anything. There is definately something cool going on with your bassline and supporting instruments, but they need a final element to complete the mix.
Otherwise, drumwork and such was fantastic.
Keep up the great work :)
Author's Response:
Yeah the main melody is probably hard to recognize, there is one slightly. I focused on the beats (mostly), speed, and overall build-up...etc.
Thanks for the review! :)
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Amen break? Who said that!?
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Great shit dude, you've gotten way better :P
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I regret not listning to your tracks earlier :P
lol, you dont need my reviews anyway- you have heaps. I dont think I'll ever know what makes people review stuff. The audio portal is a frustrating and unrewarding place.
I feel so stupid, I uploaded a track to the wrong account :P
Anyway, if you ever feel like doing a collab- feel free to drop me a line.
I'll be looking forward to more of your work, you maverick renegade.
Author's Response:
No probs Sto0g3
I know you didn't have to review,
Unrewarding eh? well we all submit our music and if people happen to like what we all do, then that's a plus in my book
Frustrating? erm I suppose, I don't let it get to me, I just do my thing
I review stuff, because I believe there are people on here that need small amounts of advice to progress, some don't any advice, I need it from time to time so I can keep improving
Collab eh? sure thing I'm always looking to push myself by working with others I find this helps
Thanks for droppig by Sto0g3
Peace Out man!
Stealth
maverick renegade? lol XD thanks!
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The song sounds great as it is, but if you want to improve, the only real direction I could suggest is adding synth sounds to support what you have going.
Keep it up, I'll be looking for your stuff in the future.
Author's Response:
Thanks for the great review, I'm always aiming to improve, and I got some new tune on the go at the moment, I will at some point re-do the tunes that have already been uploaded, based on reviews made so far! Thanks again and Peace Out! Stealth
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A good tune. But I think the pad synth is way to loud. It eats the drums, which are meant to drive techno.
Great try for a second reason attempt- way better than my older shit.
Keep up the good work!
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Hey hey. I like it. I will fuck with it and send the results to you.
Glad to see you're back, fackin' naf cunt.
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God, guit fx were good and I love your drums.
Its a shame when people only see Vesano's vox as "BLAAAAAH UGGGRHHHDHASHdAS"
But yes, this had a sorta Nile feel to it.
Actually the drums reminded me of Burzum :P
Author's Response:
thanks alot,hahaha i don't give a shit what people say about nile,i love em <3
\m/ churr as review man
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I really like your stuff man. I check your page regularly for new stuff...
This sounds sorta like Pantera if you listen to them at all :P (If not- you should XD)
Guitar sounds great as usual and the solos were good too.
Consider vocals perhaps? Surely you could find another local musician who could do them well.
Though I would be just as happy to hear the music.
Keep it up.
Author's Response:
Hey thanks for the review! I actually got the idea for the song from listening to Pantera lol. And yes someday I'll have vocals in my songs lol. I dont know if I'll find a local vocalist to do it but who knows.
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I see what could be a great song here.
Though right now it's what I'd classify as shit.
Instead of recording your keyboard (or something?), why not download some sequencing software like FruityLoops or something?
Your vocals sounded like you were 'pretending' to yell- or recorded this late at night and didn't want to death growl properly in case you woke someone up.
The few growls you did weren't bad,
but you really need to stand up away from the mic (use a pop-protector) and really TRY and pull them out of your guts instead of whispering.
I'd really like to see you do a decent version of this. I can see it being something really good.
Best of luck to you :)
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