Not bad..
One thing I could suggest is to add some sort of pad to add more depth to your song.
Slow your drums down too- they take away from the mood.
And don't be afraid to throw a supporting melody on top of what you have going already. Alternating between the melodies makes for nice dynamics.
Otherwise- keep at it. You can only get better.
I mean, listen to my old stuff and compare it to my new stuff.
Sweet suggestions man xD, sadly I am still running the demo and cant edit anything now. Future songs will catch these tips TY!
Part of the NG community during 2003-2006: Created a series of Madness Combat tribute animations called Maximum Ninja. After that I worked on Flash gamedev in varied creative roles, before making sound design and music my full-time focus.
Age 35, Male
Sound Designer
Melbourne
Joined on 10/19/03
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