Great
I don't really like any of the Industrial work on NG, but you are an exception...
This is really good, the development didn't wear thin, but got stronger as it went.
The only thing I would suggest is a dominant melody. The song builds up, but doesn't really break into anything. There is definately something cool going on with your bassline and supporting instruments, but they need a final element to complete the mix.
Otherwise, drumwork and such was fantastic.
Keep up the great work :)