All points for effort
I see what you are trying to do, and I feel that you have succeeded.. Though much work is left to be done
The last thing I'd want to do is discourage you; cause truth be told, the world can never have too many people producing stuff like this in order to say what they want to say
I feel that all my gripes I have with your techniques and whatnot aren't worth saying, cause these problems will disappear as you continue to refine your art and ideas
So my final message is to just keep going, cause you can only get better!